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The gang all stood outside Twilight's house, waiting for Fluttershy to return from the clouds with Rainbow Dash. Twilight Sparkle had managed to destroy her house with books after what she claimed to be "The wildest study day of her life." The group made small talk, waiting for the two pegasi to return to them.

"Where are they?" Twilight asked, "I doubt Rainbow Dash is asleep at this hour..."

"Oh, please." Rarity chimed in, "That pony has to be one of the laziest ponies I've met." The other rolled their eyes and continued looking up at the sky, not seeing a sign of any flying ponies coming.

The remaining four decided it was getting chilly, and to return to the house. They entered one by one, and took a seat to observe the mess Twilight had made of her house. Spike was in the corner, lazily laying in his bed, but not asleep. He sipped some juice and looked at them with his eyes dazed, not feeling any urge to make himself look presentable after all the times he's seen them.

"Spike, get up, already!" Twilight pestered. He responded by muttering to himself and rolling over. Rarity sighed and walked over to some books, lifting them up and stacking them on the shelves.

"Rarity, what are y'all doin'?" Applejack asked, "Ya know we're waitin' fer Dash to get her lazy butt over here."

Rarity sighed dramatically and turned to them, saying "We all know if she hasn't been around, then she simply MUST be sleeping, and if she's sleeping, then she's not going to listen to Fluttershy. So, we might as well get a move on."

"Oooh, no!" Applejack said, trotting over to her, "Ah ain't lettin' Dash get here and sit around while we've been doin' all the work!"

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Fluttershy finally managed to reach Rainbow Dash's house, and knocked on the door. She waited several moments, then knocked again. No answer. She knocked a few more times, only to come to the realization that Dash wasn't going to be answering.

She got tired of waiting, and trotted over to the window, and peeked in to see if anyone was home. She looked for a moment, without seeing anyone in Dash's bed, before noticing something on the floor. It was Rainbow Dash, asleep on the floor by her kitchen. Fluttershy knocked on the window, trying to get the Pegasus' attention.

"I... Uhm. Dash? Are you okay?" There was no answer. "Rainbow? R-Rainbow Dash?" Rainbow Dash didn't budge. She began panicking, and realized she was too far away to tell if she was breathing. Fluttershy managed to force the window up, then attempted to gracefully crawl through it, only to go crashing face first on the floor. She picked herself up and crawled quietly over to her friend.

"Uhm... Rainbow Dash? Are you awake?" Rainbow Dash didn't respond, "H-Hello? Please... Answer me?" Still no response. Fluttershy began panicking and picked Rainbow Dash up, and swung her on her back, then began clumsily flying back out the window.

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"There. It's done." Twilight said as she put the last few books away. The gang all cheerfully congratulated themselves for completing this task, when they heard a doorbell ring. Twilight trotted over to the door and opened it, to find Fluttershy in the doorway, looking very sad or frightened.

"There you are! We've been wondering what happened to you, was Dash home? Is she gonna come help us? Huh? Huh? Was she home, was she taking a nap like we thought? was she? What was she up to? Where is she?" Pinkie Pie rambled as Fluttershy patiently waited for her to finish.

"Well? where's Dash?" Applejack asked, as she and the others slowly walked towards her.

"Well... It's just that... Well... Uhm... Oh my..." Fluttershy said with her usual quiet voice, "I just don't know how to..."

"Just come out with it, Sugarcube!" Applejack encouraged her.

"Well... Dash is... She's uhh... She's hurt..." Fluttershy mumbled.

"Wait, what!?" Rarity asked, "Why? How hurt?"

"The doctors... Don't know yet." She said, lowering her head. The group exchanged glances for several moments.

"What? She's at the hospital?" Twilight asked, with confusion in her tone, trying to figure out what happened, "How did you end up at the hospital to find her anyway?"

"Uhm... No. I was at her house, when I found her and then took her there... Myself." Fluttershy explained. The group began rambling at the same time, leaving Fluttershy not able to understand any of them, "Oh my... Uhm... Please... Can I just..." They ignored her and continued rambling amongst each other, "Excuse me?"

"Well, clearly we should go to the hospital!" Rarity exclaimed. They all seemed to be in agreement with this, and rushed past Fluttershy, who was staring blankly, trying to figure out what just happened.

TO BE CONTINUED
Oh hai gaiz. Lol, my name's Levi. I've never submitted a story before, but I've read MANY of the AppleDash stories here on Deviant art, and decided to try my hand at it. I hope you all enjoy, it's not a horribly exciting chapter, but it's crucial to the story!!

WARNING: The entire story all in all will begin as kind of a tear jerker...
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Lizwhitewolf Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconrainbow-aplz::iconrainbow-wplz::iconrainbow-eplz::iconrainbow-splz::iconrainbow-oplz::iconrainbow-mplz::iconrainbow-eplz:
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Drlevigordon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
I never saw this comment before. It's awesome. And thank you.
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RainbowCrashh Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Student General Artist
hey how od you get the picture and the story. just wondering
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Drlevigordon Featured By Owner May 7, 2012
Google images is magic my friend.
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SugarCube16 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This looks promising! I'm excited to see how this continues. :)
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Drlevigordon Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
Yay, thanks :) like I said, I'm new to the whole writing thing, but I hope I do a decent job! I'm used to writing scripts for webshows, so I'm not used to a whole lot of detail, haha
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SugarCube16 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I see! :meow:
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